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Username: Colleenmary. Very very plain. I'm guessing it's your name. Cute name, but no originality here. [2/10 points]
First Impression: Yes, its a Something Corporate Layout. I'll love this. Not to clattered, looks nice. [18/20 points]
Content: Hmm, it was a little hard to get into your writing. You use no capitals, no nothing. Usually, I wouldn't mind so much, because I do it to sometimes. Keyword being sometimes. You do it all the time. Other then that, you write about everyday kinda stuff. You have the occasional emotional entry, which I love. I think thats what makes your diary great. Overall, its okay, but it could use some grammar. [25/55 points]
Layout: LOVE IT! Absolutely Love it. A great band. VERY nice lyrics. Wow, I'm lovin it. [40/40 points]
Contact: The "im me" link is broken. Fix that or take it off. And you have a guestbook, and a notes section. [2.5/5 points]
Personality: You seem like a cool chick. Easygoing, fun, emotional...a cool chick.
Extras: Adjectives, Dailies, Moods, and a counter. Nice. [8/10 points]
Am I linked? I dont see a link to us. [0/5 points]
Favorite entries: You have a lot of emotion in this entry. I loved it. http://colleenmary.diaryland.com/040110_56.html[20/25 points]
Originality: Nothing that really sticks out, but nothing bland either. It was okay. [5/10 points.]
Quotes: "i`m just devistated. i dont know why he did this all to me. i dont know what i did to deserve this. i just couldnt stop crying all that night. im just really lost right now and i don`t know what to do." GREAT emotion.
Most Memorable: Nothing really.
Comments: Try to use better grammer, and capitilization when needed. Things like that would help a lot. You also seem to have potentional to be a pretty good writer. Keep up the good work. And fix the "im me" link.
Would I come back: Eh, possibly.[10/20 points]
Total: [130.5/200]
[reviewed by: Shannon]