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Username: Pocolovesjc. By the username and layout, I can see you're talking about JC from Nsync. I can relate to the whole boyband thing, because I was a huge O-town fan. So, I personally like it, but it could be a little more original. [7/10]
First Impression:Wheres all the links for profile, archives, etc? Other then that, I love the layout. I think its cute how it has sort of a mirror-image thing going on. I like it, but PLEASE get some links. I'm going to have to click back to read all the entries. [10/20]
Content: Good length to the entries. I really enjoyed that. I like what you write about. You usually always contain something about JC in your entries, which again, I can relate to, but try to open up a little more. You use computer slang, which most reviewers take many points off for, but I do it in my diary too, so its not THAT big of a deal. After a while, they got a tad bit boring, kind of like a daylog, but you do put some emotion into them, which I think is great. Try to ease up on the internet slang, and really try to open up some more. It seems like you have potention to become a great writer. [40/55]
Layout: Like I mentioned before, I really enjoy the template. I'm not a fan of nsync at all, but the mirror image has got me hooked. I love it. There's no credit to the designer, so im guessing either you made it, or just didnt give credit. All in all, I like it.[ 30/40 points]
Contact: No contact methods. No links for notes, guestbook, aim, aol, email, etc. Try to get some of that stuff on your diary. If you need help with it, let me know and i'd be happy to help you. [0/5 points]
Personality: After reading your diary, i would say you're a lot like me, and I can relate to a lot you have going on. You seem like a very nice person, and someone who would be fun to hang around.
Extras: No extras. [0/10 points]
Am I linked? No links [0/5 points]
Favorite entries: I liked this one the best. Had a lot of funny quotes and such.http://pocolovesjc.diaryland.com/031220_70.html [20/25 points]
Originality: Hmm, well, youre a lot like anyone else youre age in my opinion, but thats not a bad thing, and you have your way of adding spice to things:) [8/10 points.]
Quotes: "Blowin' Me Up -the place went INSANE!!! everyone was jumping up n down and singing along, it was amazing!"
Most Memorable: Most memorable thing is that you love JC :)
Comments: Please add some links for your navigation. Also try to add a bio page, and some extras. If you need help, let me know.
Would I come back: To check up on things, sure why not.[15/20 points]
Total: [130/200]
[reviewed by: Shannon]