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What you see is what you get -- this is me
Username: [6/10 points] Hmmm... Falling02Star. I like the name "Falling Star" but I'm not sure I like the "02" in the middle of it. What is it for?
First Impression: [20/20 points] Ooh! Black-and-white! That was before everything else loaded... ;D
Content: [55/55 points] Not bad at all. You seem like a pretty smart girl. And your writing sounds somewhat like mine. I really like that you don't TyPe LyKe DiS and you've got grammar and punctuation on your side, too. [Word up: I'm a stickler for all 3 of the things mentioned in the past sentence!] It looks like you update daily, too, and I really admire that. On the precious-few days that lack an update, you have a double to make up for it on another day. GOOD! I hate poor, neglected diaries that only have 5 entries a month. That can really blow sometimes. You're only 14?! I definitley thought you were older by your writing until, of course, I discovered otherwise. Full Points. You earned it.
Layout: [25/40 points] ...Is this self-designed? If so, I'd give you props because most self-designed layouts are an absolute mess. I'm not sure I'm feelin' this one, frankly, and it might just be the fact that it doesn't have clean scrolling. If you play with the positions of your image and the tables, it should move the entire page up so you don't have the scrollbar to the far right. I like the scrolling entry, truthfully, but if you're going to have one -- try to make it so the whole page doesn't scroll, as well! This is simple stuff, though... I know you'll get that cleaned up. ;D Everything on the menu/sidebar is nice and organized, and I liked that, but the text in the entry itself is scrunched a little too closely to the left side of the dashed lines. I like the dashed lines, too. If you can make it so that all of the dashes are the same, that'd be great... the right side looks a little thicker than the left, and that is a bit distracting. Finally, I'm not big on the blue arrows. The mouseovers on the links aren't my cup of tea, but they are not constant. The arrows on the scrollbar, however, are. I'd recommend black, or if you are sticking to the grey on the side, the same shade of grey as used in the rest of it. Could you align the Britney lyrics at the top of the menu, by the way? [[I'm sorry if I'm being anal about your layout -- I'm not trying to bash you, I swear!]]
Contact: [5/5 points] Guestbook. E-mail. Tagboard.
Personality: You seem like a really sweet girl. It doesn't sound like you've been entirely corrupted by life, and that rocks. You definitley seem wise beyond your years. Like I said from the jump: I thought you were a lot older than you were! Keep up the greatness.
Extras: [10/10 points] Oodles of extras! Rock on.
Am I linked: [5/5 points] Yes'm. Thank you!
Favorite entries: [25/25 points] One, Two, and Three!
Originality: [10/10 points.] You are SO not like every other person your age...don't change that for anyone or anything!
Quotes: "What do I want out of this year? The year 2004? I've been asked several tims today and it's only the first of the year. I want to kill Brenna's mom.. no I'm just kidding. I want Brenna's mom to realize what she's doing to her children. I want Brenna to move in with her Dad and Kim, even though I don't at the same time.. it's whats best for her. I want to show Andy that God loves him and that the strongest love comes from God. I want to lead him farther away from drugs, cutting, and smoking than just quitting for me. I want to learn from Andy and say with him for as long as the mutual feeling stays between us. I want to fall in love with him, maybe not forever, but I want to experience falling in love and I believe Andy would make a great first "love," I guess. I want to keep people on their toes. Make them wonder about me. I want to get involved in Dance again. After quitting last year I want to go back. I put 10 years of my life into dancing and I want to go back, at least for a little while. I want to be in the spring play this year, wether it be stage crew or acting! I want to start highschool in the fall with flying colors. I want to put aside the fear of going to highschool altogether. I'm sure on the spur of the moment there will be many things I want but for now I just have basic outlines."
Most Memorable: The reaction I had when I found out how old you were. Wish you could've seen that. Your reflective personality.
Comments: You're great. You're not just a carbon copy of some other teenager and I really, really like that.
Would I come back: [20/20 points] More than likely!
Total: [181/200]
[reviewed by: Laura-Kathleen]