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Username: Beingme101. Hmm, not that original, but it's got a bit of a ring to it. I might click it. [7/10 points]
First Impression: Oh great, a diaryland template. Unorganized. Nice music though. [5/20 points]
Content: I like your writing. Good spelling, which is a plus. Most of your entries are a good length, which is also a plus. Sometimes you write about everyday things, but sometimes you write about interesting things as well. You do tend to daylog somewhat, and that's a big point reducer right there. You're about my age, so I can relate to a lot of stuff going on in your life, and you do seem very mature for your age which is a great thing. Just try to show a little more emotion in your entries. Thats what you need to work on the most in my opinion. [25/55 points]
Layout: Okay I CAN NOT stand it. PLEASE, for the love of God, get a non-diaryland template. They are so very unnatractive. I do like the music. I really love that song, and it seems to go with your personality. Other then that, it's WAY to cluttered, everytime I open a new page, about 10 pop-ups come up on my computer, which is EXTREMELY irritating. AHH please fix it up. PLEASE. [5/40 points]
Contact: Email and some sort of chatterbox type of thing. Add some notes, a guestbook, maybe a link to some sort of screen name. [2/5 points]
Personality: You seem like a great guy. Please don't be dissapointed by the bad score. It's just that your diary needs some work. I understand that it's for you, but other people out there may want to read it, and it's not so nice to look at. But like I said, you seem like a great person, with a great life ahead of you. :)
Extras: Some things at the bottom of your diary which I dont really get, and that chatterbox thing. [2/10 points]
Am I linked? I see no link. :( [0/5 points]
Favorite entries: I honestly liked your first entry the best. It showed a bunch of emotion. [10/25 points]
Originality: You seem very original, but at the same time, a normal 16 year old guy. [5/10 points.]
Quotes: None. Sorry.
Most Memorable: Honestly, nothing.
Comments: FIX THE LAYOUT! PLEASE! I love the music. Your writing is pretty decent, just add some more emotion and explination.
Would I come back: I'm sorry, but NO. Well, maybe just to hear that song.[1/20 points]
Total: [60/200]
[reviewed by: Shannon]