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Username: Evilmonkey08. Hey, it's pretty cute. I'd most likely click on it if i saw it. Nice idea! [10/10 points]
First Impression: Aww the layout matches the username, major props on that one, I love that. Very cute colors, not at all crowded, lots of links to press. Hmm, I think i'll enjoy it. [18/20 points]
Content: I started out with your very first entry, and there just wasn't much to it. I did however love the little "final thought" at the end of the entry. That was cute. I then kept on reading, hoping to find some emotion and I got to the third entry. "So many emotions," I believe it's called. VERY great emotions. WOAH! You're only 13? Wow, I thought you were at least my age. Very mature for your age! Props on that one. I kept reading, and you have a bunch of pointless entries. Just entries that didn't need to be there. Then I got to the one about how you hate labels, and that was interesting to read. Again, a lot of good emotion. I also realy like your recent entry called, "Lack of Self-Esteem" I can relate to it a lot, and it shows that you're a very strong person, even though you may not think so. You really need to try and capitalize a little more, that's the only thing that bugged me. And try to leave out those "not so important" entries. [45/55 points]
Layout: I LOVE THE LAYOUT! Cute picture! Cute colors! It's great. Full points on this one![ 40/40 points]
Contact: Guestbook, notes, and e-mail. Good, but try to add a screen name of some sort maybe.[4/5 points]
Personality: You seem like a wonderful person! Very mature for your age, which can be a good thing, but also remember that you're only young once, and you need to make the best of it. Go out, party, have fun, be a teenager! IT KICKS BOOTY! Other then that, youre a great girl, and it seems as if youve got a lot ahead of you in life.
Extras: Fans, and a broken reviews link. Add some information about you. Maybe a survey or something like that. [5/10 points]
Am I linked? There's the link! Good job. :) [5/5 points]
Favorite entries: The ones I mentioned in "content" are all great! [25/25 points]
Originality: VERY original, and in a VERY good way. I love it! [10/10 points.]
Quotes: "my final words today will be never put toothpaste on your forehead thinking it gets rid of zits. its very sticky." That was funny.
Most Memorable: Just issues with band and things like that.
Comments: Add some more ways of contact and some extras. Try to use capital letters when needed. Other then that, I LOVED IT!
Would I come back: YES! I'll probably even add you to fave diaries!.[20/20 points]
Total: [182/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]