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Username: madia38901. Uh, Yea i'm sorry, but I really don't like it. It's most likely just your name, and a whole bunch of #'s. I wouldn't click on it, and it's not original. [0/10 points]
First Impression: The colors are kinda cool, the layout is okay. This is probably going to be one of those, "I hate my life, kill me now," kind of diaries, but i'll read on and find out. [5/20 points]
Content: I started with your first entry, and you pretty much lost me after the first sentence, with all your weird talk. Okay, I know you're 13, but at least TRY and sound intelligent if you can. Usually, entries get better as time goes on, so let's see. Okay, it's not getting better AT ALL. Every other entry youre pissed at someone else, and you dont really explain ANYTHING. The only people that would be able to understand this god forsaken diary, is your friends. I know thats mainly who reads it, but what about other people? Ahh, I've got about 10 more entries to read. MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE they get better. Okay, I read all of them, and it didn't improve at all. In EVERY single entry, you write little personal notes to your friends. Great for your friends, but horrible for poor reviewers. And the slang you use, PLEASE LEARN HOW TO SPEAK PROPERLY! Agh, thank GOD im done with reading this one. I'll give you a few points, only because I can't be a TOTAL bitch. [5/55 points]
Layout: It's not great. But it's okay. It doesnt REALLY reflect your personality, but I guess it's an okay choice. I like the colors. And the navigation isn't to bad. [30/40 points]
Contact: E-mail. And a guestbook book, which doesnt count, because the link doesn't bring me to your guestbook..[1/5 points]
Personality: Youre a young one. 13. And I understand that most people your age still haven't grown up, but I just don't like reading your diary. You're to young and you dont seem to know the difference between whats important in life, and what's not. Im sorry, it's just my opinion.
Extras: No extras whatsoever. [0/10 points]
Am I linked? No link either. Darn. [0/5 points]
Favorite entries: Not one! [0/25 points]
Originality: You're like all the other 13 year old little girls. But at least you write about your feelings and seem to be TRYING to grow up. [3/10 points.]
Quotes: NADA!
Most Memorable: The whole Hunter thing I guess.
Comments: Just add some extras. Add some contact methods. And write about IMPORTANT things. Let out your feelings. You just write about things that HAPPENED, you dont go to deep into your feelings about them. YAWN.
Would I come back: I'd rather eat a bug. And I hate bugs. [0/20 points]
Total: [44/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]