2004-02-08 | 1:04 p.m.
Username: Cobaby. It's cute. Not quite sure about the story behind it, but I like it. I'd click it if i saw it.[10/10 points]
First Impression:Agh I don't like this layout at all. I love the colors black and pink, but in this layout they clash. Especially with the purple. And whats with the Nicole Loves Justin at the top? It throws everything out of order. The navigation looks like it'll be easy, so thats a plus. [7/20 points]
Content: I started with your first entry, and your style of writing doesn't stand out or anything, but it's certainly not bad. Then I read your second entry, and it was FULL of horrid internet slang and just horrible grammar. I kept on reading, and it hasn't gotten better yet. For example, you spelt Sunday, "Sundee." That was just horrible. Come one, I know you know how to spell the days of the week. SHOW IT. You show no emotion what so ever. Your diary is more for friends. Not reviewers or any random person from diaryland. You talk about stuff that happens day to day, but you never really say how you feel about it. In one entry, "I hope I never Lose him," you actually show some emotion, which was a good thing. Try to stick with that, let the readers know how you feel about certain things. And please, work with the spelling. [20/55 points]
Layout: I'm sorry, but I can't stand it. It doesn't seem to match your personality at all, the colors clash like crazy, and it's not a good set-up. Please try to fix it up. It'd be even better if you could find a better template, but i'll leave that up to you. The links all work, and theyre set up nicely. That's the only thing you get points for.[10/40 points]
Contact: Notes. Guestbook. Email. Add an aim/aol/yahoo sn, and maybe a tag board. [3/5 points]
Personality: You seem like the kind of person I would totally clash with. One of those popular, the world revolves around me people. That's the feeling I get from your diary. Hopefully i'm wrong, but hey it's the vibe your diary gives.
Extras: Your webpage, lyrics, personality, and fun quizzes. It's okay I guess. Try to add some quizzes you took or something. Not just a link to have other people take them. [4/10 points]
Am I linked? I don't see it anywhere.[0/5 points]
Favorite entries: The one where you say how you cant lose your boyfriend. [5/25 points]
Originality: You seem like the typical popular teen. [2/10 points.]
Quotes: None. Sorry.
Most Memorable: I guess the way you care about your boyfriend.
Comments: I don't even want to waste my time.
Would I come back: No. Please no more.[0/20 points]
Total: [61/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]