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Username: Kerrierw. I'm guessing it's your first name and maybe your middle and last initial? Uh, not to original, but I do gotta say, I like the name Kerrie, so if thats your name, all the more power to ya, if not you just earned yourself some points anyway. [5/10 points]
First Impression: I'm kind of undecided when I first open up your diary. I think I like the layout. The colors are pretty. They mix well together. Hmm. [13/20 points]
Content: I started with your first entry, and OH NO! No capitlization when needed. For some reason, that really irks me in diaries. Let's pray it gets better. For both our sakes. Your first 10 or so entries, are pointless. Why do you daylog so much? You seem like a person with a lot to say, and a bunch of goals. Talk more about that. Go into your emotions. Not just what time you woke up in the morning or things like that. Anyway, I kept on reading, and PRAISE THE LORD, you started using capitlization. Good Job. Wow girl, your poems kick ass. I couldn't really get into your life, well your diary anyway. It just wasn't all that interesting to read. It was a lot of daylogging. [25/55 points]
Layout: I've decided that I do like the layout. I love the colors. The image is beautiful. And it fits you very well. I love that. [40/40 points]
Contact: E-mail. Gbook. Notes. Tagboard. Good enough for me.[5/5 points]
Personality: I think your a person with A LOT of hidden talent. You seem to have potention in many areas. Especially with your poems. They are absolutely amazing and left me wanting to read more. You seem very down to earth, and all in all, a really nice person.
Extras: More then enough. And WOW I love the pictures. [10/10 points]
Am I linked? Yup. :)[5/5 points]
Favorite entries: The poems one. [15/25 points]
Originality: Yea, original enough. [10/10 points.]
Quotes: "I want you
I can’t have you
I like you
I don’t know if I want you
I love you
I hate you
I crave you
I’d break you
I want you
Don’t not want you
Wouldn’t let you
Wouldn’t love you
I’d scare you
I’d adore you
Grow to know you
I knew you
Smile at you
Turn my back on you
everything you do
I hate about you
And I’d do for you
Nothing I could do
That’s why I’d do
Anything for you"
Most Memorable: The poems.
Comments: Just work on adding more emotion to your diary. Once you do that, I think you'll be fine.
Would I come back: I don't think so. Im sorry.[2/20 points]
Total: [130/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]