2004-04-22 | 4:56 p.m.
Username: Btrflykiss. I LOVE IT. It's my favorite username i've seen yet. It's so cute, it reminds me of that song Butterfly Kisses, and it's just..SUPER cute! 5 extra points for that! [15/10 points]
First Impression: I don't particularly like the layout, and it's quite annoying how the words are right on the image. It makes it a tad bit hard to read. But, I do like the colors. [10/20 points]
Content: I started with your first entry, and i'm not to fond of the whole big capital yellow letter when there's a new paragraph, but I guess that doesn't technically count as content. But wow, it's really annoying me. You're first entry was very short, and it didn't tell me much. Just that you don't like fake looking hair, which kind of annoyed me, because I have natural brown hair, and I highlight it. That won't deduct any points from your score, but it's still rude. Moving on. You're entries are basically typical high school entries, but there's nothing wrong with that. I could somewhat get into your diary. Some entries were daylogs, some were deep thinking kind of entries, but you're writing didn't really stick out in anyway. I guess, all in all, it's okay. [40/55 points]
Layout: Well, I don't like it, but I guess it kind of matches your personality, and that's what counts, right? [30/40 points]
Contact: Tagboard, aim, and notes. Add an email or something maybe. [4/5 points]
Personality: Nothing really sticks out. I guess you seem like a nice girl.
Extras: A bunch. I really like the, "whats in my purse one." [10/10 points]
Am I linked? I am! [5/5 points]
Favorite entries: Memories are nice.., and NYC kicks ass. [25/25 points]
Originality: Pretty good. [10/10 points.]
Quotes: "You can say a lot of things about nyc - you can say that it's dirty, the traffic is insane, crime is rampant - you can diss it all you want, but it will always be my home and no matter where my life takes me, a part of me will always be here in nyc."
-I live about 40 minutes from nyc, and it's my home away from home. I adore it, and that's where my heart will always be. So for your love of NYC, you get 5 extra points! +5!
Most Memorable: Prom stuff.
Comments: I basically already summed everything up. It's a great diary to have your friends read, but when someone like a reviewer comes, it's a little bit hard to get into. By the way, I love your name. :)
Would I come back: Possibly, but I doubt it.[10/20 points]
Total: [164/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]