Username & diary title: (9/10) Oh. That’s a good username. I’m trying to think about it in a different way... The diary title is, well, special.

First Impression: (10/20) It’s so blue. The layout is messed up.

Layout: (30/40) Yes, the layout overlaps into the writing. I can tell it’s a picture of Gollum, which i s superbly cool. I love the blue and the font is perfect. I really wish you would fix that picture problem...I can’t read the first paragraph of whatever you write on it.

Contact: (5/5) Yuppers. All but your snailmail.

Extras: (15/10) Golly. Guestbook. Reviews. Autobiography. Guestmap. Cast. reviews. username.

Am I Linked: (5/5) Of course.

Content: (54/55) I have to say, I love your diary. The first thing I read was the autobiography page, because I always like to know about the readers before I read their diary. You are a typical teenager. Another aspiring writer who “knows” they can write. The difference between them and you? You actually can write. And well. You have no idea how rare this is...You’re a daylogger, but not to the extent where it gets annoying, which has always been my dream. I love the random Orlando Bloom pictures. An English teacher, huh? Good. Good. Make sure you teach them how to spell, okay? And to capitalize pronouns, because you cannot believe the number of people who do not capitalize the pronoun “I” in everyday writing. Sorry, pet peeve.

Anyway, your diary is wonderfully delightful to read. I love how you can make me laugh even when you are in the middle of a very serious paragraph. I doubt you know you’re doing it. Don’t take this the wrong way, but you’re like a drug. I must read more.

(Note: One point is off because you complained a little too much for my taste -1)

Favorite Entries: (25/25)I have no idea why I like This One

I just do.

Nice

My favorite

good as well

So, he’s the one you love?

Personality: Poetic. Deep. Easily pissed off. Sarcastic. (in a good way) Loved. Needed. “Unique”

Quotes:

If a guy had book cologne, I'd be all over him.

I don't know what happened to myself. I used to be someone that I would actually like, and now I don't even remember who I was. I've feel like I've been drained, and sucked dry. I feel like there's nothing left that I'm living for. I used to be in love, and now I live inside the shadow of what that was. I used to have seeds of creativity growing steadily inside my head, and they're dead now. I can't write my poetry, I can't focus on my work, I don't find pleasure in the things I used to. So I've started reading my diary from last year every day. I want to remember who I was. I was the girl that hated everything, and the girl with a witty comeback for anything anyone would say. And I used to be someone. Someone that I liked, and I'm not that person anymore. And I don't know what to do about that.

Your song: I have absolutely no idea. There are so many different parts to you. Shot in the dark- Maroon5 “She Will Be Loved”

Your new name: “Audrey” does not work for you. How about... Maple or Autumn

You should be: An event- Writing. All the time. A thing- A leaf. I have no idea why I picked a leaf. You remind me of one. (???)

You remind me of: A book. You’re very secretive yet you still tell all. I have to read some things twice to catch the real meaning.

Comments: You’re very witty and sharp on your toes. You write well. I love how you tel about what you did everyday but still manage to show emotion. KEEP DOING IT.

Would I Come Back: (20/20) Yes. You’re in my favorites.

Total Score: 183/190

[reviewed by:Sarah V.]