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i want the life you think I have...
Content:[35/50] A few typo's here and there and lacking capitalization. Some entries are short and sweet and others are long and deep. I prefer longer entries, but only if the writer can entertain me and keep my attention, which you did. Brava! Some entries expressed only pure emotion and other seemed like they were done just out of boredom. [I know how that goes.] A bit of drama here and there, a few serious things, and some humor sprinkled in the mix. Variety is nice.
Layout:[30/50] I like the layout alot. I see it's by evilgnome designs. The picture is nice. I don't really see you as being depressed or ecstatically happy either, I'm assuming you're somewhat in the middle, so this layout suits you perfectly. My only bitch is the links at the bottom. It's your diary and I understand that you might want to add a few extra links here and there, but my advice would be to get a design that is specifically designed to hold more links than the one you're using. I'm not saying it's ghastly and obscence, I'm just saying I'm more of a "neatly to the side" type of girl.
Contact:[5/5] Guestbook. Notes. Email.
Updates:[15/15] Pretty regularly. Alot of multiples at first, but I assume you got bored later and decided only to update on a whim, which is quite all right.
Extras:[10/10] Enough. Profile. Guestbook. Links. Cast. Reviews. Lyrics. Memories [older diary]. One Word [site]. Rings. Photos.
Comments: I like this alot. It's a tiny bit emotional at some points and other times it just tells what you're thinking. It contains drama [I love it!] and how you feel about things. I like the way you write. You leave a few things out, but usually filled in later what you were talking about. It was actually kind of suspenseful, I suppose.
Quotes: "I kinda felt like a supermodel or something. i had a smile on my face, felt gorgerous, smelt pretty and the boys were staring and whistling (in a flattering way). I just felt on top of the world, like i knew what i wanted and where i wanted to go."
Favorite Entries:[45/50] 1,2,3
Would I Come Back:[20/20] I always do. [Smiles]
Total:[150/200]
