Username: [10/10 points] It's actually pretty cool. I like the many, many ways you can take it and any name without a string of numbers behind it is good enough for me.

First Impression: [20/20 points] Ooh la la! Writing? What writing? Oh, there it is. Definitely an attention grabber.

Content: [55/55 points] First thing I noticed was the lack of capitalization. You punctuate fairly well, so no issues with that. Oh my god, you write so beautifully. A lot of your entries are taken up by this "A" person and you realize that, but emotions, and the way you feel for a person are a great thing to express. And the way you express them is astonishingly poetical. You have a few daily accounts fo your life scattered throughout, but the way you word it makes it rather interesting. I love the way you relate things that most people wouldn't even think about. You remind me a lot of myself, or maybe what I'll be like when I'm a bit older, but either way I certainly connect. You seem to have a wide range of vocabulary also, and your spelling is great. Very few typo's. I read every single entry and all I have to say is "Wow."

Layout: [40/40 points] Divadesigns. I've never seen this layout before. That's a shocker. I like it and not just because there's a man's muscular, sweaty, perfectly toned, beautiful...uhhh chest there. Okay, well that might have a bit to do with it. Seriously, I like this layout a lot. The quote at the top is hilarious. Also, the "guys/suck" as the previous and next links....pure genius. I don't usually like links seperated the way they are at the bottom, but there's really no other place they could be. I have absolutely no complaints about this layout. It sort of clashes with your writing, but I guess I'll let that go since it is something outside of butterflies, teddy bears, sunsets, and pop stars.

Contact: [4/5 points] Guestbook. Notes. Email.

Personality: Well, since your moods and emotions reminded me a lot of my own I figured your personality was a bit like mine. From your writing I gathered you were witty and sarcastic. You seem somewhat depressed, but I think it's more or less from your own mind and not necessarily from bad things in your life. I'm not judging, because I don't know what all has happened through the years, but from what I've read it seems like it could be a lot worse. You tend to be a teensy bit jealous when it comes to attention, but I think you just want someone in your life who will give you all the happiness and attention you deserve.

Extras: [7/10 points] Guestbook. Links. Rings. Linkers. Cast. You definitely need a few more extras. Maybe a mini-bio or something to let the reader know a bit more about you.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] There I be.

Favorite entries: [35/25 points] One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven.

Originality: [9/10 points.] Although many diaries are focused on love/relationships, you have a special way of writing that caught my eye. Plus, the layout is rather intriguing.

Quotes:

how am i supposed to make it stop? it's almost torture. it's certainly torment, and i didn't think that's what love was about.

nick got me sleeping pills. tylenol sleep. the box says they're not addictive, but i'm used to those kind of lies. everything is addictive if you become attached.

Most Memorable: This "A" creature. The issue(s) with your sister. Your friends. The way you write. Almost everything.

Comments: I found a lot I loved about your journal. It gave me plenty to think about for the next few hours. You have a really special talent when it comes to writing and I encourage you to pursue it. Your entries are soaked in emotion, emotion that doesn't seem forced, might I add. That's hard to find lately with all the trend whore pre-pubescent/teenagers running around. I absolutely loved your diary, and if you don't mind, may I add you to my favorite?

Would I come back: [20/20 points] I never want to leave!

Total: [205/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]