at13oclock
2006-03-06 | 8:54 a.m.

Mmmm .... chicken????

Username & diary title: (5/10) at13oclock - It's unique & elegant. It also strikes me as coming off a bit creepy. It could just be my strange superstitions, though. ;P It's not something I would use, but I definitely like it. Mmmm .... chicken???? - Hm. It's certainly ... different. I doubt I would understand it without your layout, so it's sort of confusing. You took a shot at doing something different, but I don't think it's working.

First Impression: (10/20) Ew! I like the pastel greens, but the chocolate & reference to chocolate & chicken must go. I'm pregnant & certain things don't fly too well with me. Food, being one of them. I would imagine you'r' a big chocolate ... or chicken fan ... it's hard to tell which one you're representing, honestly.

Layout: (30/40) Temp Challenge. Although I don't like the constant chocolate being shoved in my face right now, nor the strange references; it is a seemingly well designed layout. The brushes (on the image) appear to be a bit blurry & distorted, but everything else looks great. It is a nice layout, but personal choices & the fact that it made me want to vomit makes you lose a few points.

Contact: (3/5) Guestbook. Notes. Email. Just enough.

Extras: (10/10) WOW! You have millions of extras! Adoptees. All About My Name. Autobiography. Booklist. Cast. Rings. Fanlistings. Pictures. P-O-Y. Previous Looks. Etc...

Am I Linked: (10/5) I am STILL linked, after all this time. 5 Bonus points!

Content: (25/55) The first 10 or so entries I ran across were simply "I'm updating to let you know I'll update." Or they explained why you hadn't written anything in ages. When you do (or did) write you usually seemed to be rushed & never took the time to say much of anything meaningful. You would mention a few things going on in your life, but never really explained them or how you felt about the situations. A diary, in my opinion, wether it be personal, online, public, etc... should be for opening up & letting things out. It shouldn't be there for you to type/jot an "I'm too busy to do this now." or "Today I feel bad." If you went more in depth with your feelings to yourself (or anyone) you probably wouldn't have as much mental bullshit going on. You should open up more or if you can't, at least find a better topic. Grammar seems to be up to par, minus the incessant use of elipsis.

Favorite Entries: (10/25) A. B.

Personality: Withdrawn. Selfish. Narcisistic. Apathetic. Little Girl.

Quotes: If I had to quote anything, it would be "B" from the Favorite Entries.

Your song: Unwritten Law - She Says. I don't know why, but it seems to suit your personality.

Your new name: Randie. A young girl I know with caboodles of mental problems that are mostly figments of her imagination & products of her environment.

You should be: helped. No kidding. It makes me feel terrible knowing that there are people out there with these kinds of problems. That feel that bad. If you haven't already, please seek help.

You remind me of: For some reason or another, I kept thinking of Hilary Duff the entire time I was reviewing you. It's silly. Maybe it was your name. I'm not sure & apologize that you reminded me of someone so lame.

Comments: First, get help. Your writing could use major work, but I think I explained your biggest problem. Not opening up.

Would I Come Back: (10/20) Maybe once to see how you're doing.

Total Score: 113/190
[reviewed by: Mandy]

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