Username: [0/10 points] No. I definitely wouldn't click on it. It's just the name Beckie, with the "e" expressed as a 3. Boring.

First Impression: [18/20 points] I love blue and white layouts. I don't know about this one though. I'll have to get used to it. Plain and simple. I do like that.

Content: [35/55 points] For starters, most of your entries are long. Longer than they should be and I don't like reading them. Your layout makes them appear longer than they actually are, so you might want a layout that appears to decreas the length. The writing is rather dayloggish. It's mostly about what you did that day, the day before, or what you plan on doing the day after. I couldn't get into it that much. It could be our vast differences or your simple style of writing. You have a great vocabulary, the grammar is nearly perfect, punctuation and capitalization are great. You could work on your style a little more. I began with the first entry of January and finished with the end of March. You have a great diary that's full of things that you want to remember and cherish. I admire that it's not just a collection of ramblings and rants. You have a diary that can be looked back on when you're older and remember the good (and bad} times in your life. It wasn't an interesting read to me, but it serves it's purpose for you and I'm sure your friends get a jolly from reading it. Keep writing for yourself, because that's exactly what you should do.

Layout: [35/40 points] Design. It's a very simple blue and white layout with the word "peace" at the top in a mystical looking font. It reminds me of a Christmas card. You know those simple cards you get for Christmas from the people who don't want to waste the pretty cards on you? Anyways, I like the simplicity of the layout and how it focuses mainly on your writing. I don't like the random "peace" at the top, but it works here. The links are in a neat horizontal row across the top seperated by lines. I don't see anything wrong with the layout. It seems fairly fitting, but I wouldn't use it. It's not my style. It's a nice layout , but I would opt for something a little more personal.

Contact: [5/5 points] Guestbook. Notes. Email. Tagboard.

Personality: Simple. Funny. Mediocre. Smart. Normal. Yourself.

Extras: [8/10 points] I-mood. Bio. Quizzes. Horoscopes. Cast. Reviews. Friends. Smilies.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] Certainly.

Favorite entries: [20/25 points] One, Two, Three, Four.

Originality: [6/10 points] In some aspects of the word, yes.

Quotes: I like this, but I don't understand.

There is no need to fake who you like and who you don't like. It was a place where everything was how it should be. If it wasn't for fakeness do you think there would have had been a WWI or a WWII?

Want to fill me?

Most Memorable: You. The way you still write for yourself.

Comments: You had a great diary. It just wasn't my choice of reading, you know? Don't let 'lil' ole me get you down. If I were you, I would probably change the layout to something a little more vibrant and less simple. I would also add a few more extras, so I could get to know you better. Overall, you had a nice diary filled with things you'll want to remember years from now, and even though I didn't find it astonishingly brilliant, you'll be glad that you wrote these things down later.

Would I come back: [18/20 points] Probably.

Total: [150/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy].