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broken songs from the past written by babybea

Username:[4/10 points] I don't know. I wouldn't check it out if it was on alist. Kind fo sounds boring or something.

First Impression:[10/20 points] Ew. Crowded. I don't want to read this. Everything's overlapped. Possibly a good thing ruined by a bad layout.

Content: [20/50 points] I didn't want to read it. I had to highlight to read corners of the entries because of the words overlapping the pictures. I got aggravated after about 3 entries and decided not to read anymore. From what I read it seemed kind of day to day, unemotional, and nothing all too special. You used those "punctuation faces" and I hate that. IF I had read a little more, I might have gotten into it, but because of having to highlight every entry, I just got annoyed.

Layout: [15/40 points] I don't dig it. It's too crowded and the entries are hard to read. It's Beatles. The font looks gathered. It's self-designed, so that gains some points. Make it neater or more defined or something. Another perk was the no "previous and next" links at the bottom of the entries. Most of your entries were pretty long and I definitely didn't like havng to go all the way back to the top to go forward.

Contact: [5/5 points] Guestbook. Email. Notes. Tagboard.

Updates: [4/5 points] Well, you missed a whole month and quite a few days and I'm usually not this picky, but ...I don't like the layout.

Extras: [10/10 points] Profile. Attributes. Purpose. Family. Rings. Reviews.

Am I linked? [5/5 points] Yep.

Favorite entries: [12/25 points] I didn't want to read it all. None, but I'm nice so partial credit you get.

Originality: [2/10 points.] Nope.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: Nothing.

Comments: It's not you, it's me.

Would I come back:[10/20 points] I might if the layout was changed.

Total: [97/200]

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