Username:[2/10 points] Nothing new at all. I wouldn't click it. I've seen it 1,000 times, only with different numbers.

First Impression:[9/20 points] Oh god, this looks really crowded. The font looks like a pain in the ass to read too. The colors are kind of pretty. The picture is too mushy, romantic for me. I don't think I'll read much because of the wee tiny font that burns my eyes. What is it with all this pop music I keep hearing?!?

Content: [20/50 points] Basically day to day events. Noting extraordinary here. You talk about friends, your boyfriend, and what you did. You don't have emotions ,hun. You have whining. I couldn't stand to read some of the crap you complained about. I didn't dislike your diary. You use decent grammar skills and all that snazzy stuff, but it was just boring. That doesn't mean you're boring, it means the way present things was boring. I really hope your diary isn't a mirror image of the way you would write in reality. If it is, well... good luck with the journalism career. I basically just got bored with the day-to-day, repetitive drama. Every teenager goes through it and every teenager whines about it. You're no different.

Layout: [18/40 points]Here. I despise those about me sidebar things. I really do. It has so much going on that you can't possibly concentrate on one particular thing. The writing should be the main focus of your diary and I keep wanting to skip around and check everything else out too. The font is really fucking tiny. It could just be my computer, but it hurts my eyes to read it. You should really put that tagboard somewhere else too. It takes up alot of area there. I suggest adding it to a seperate page and linking to it. That music thing is really annoying. I had music playing and it overtook my computer and started playing Backstreet Boys or whatever it is you have playing. Props for having music, but not everybody wants to hear that shit [and by shit, I do mean shit]. Archive, love. They're a mess.

Contact: [5/5 points]Email. Notes. Guestbook.

Updates: [5/5 points] I really don't care about updates to be honest, so I'm not looking. Free points.

Extras: [8/10 points] Guestbook. Reviews. Rings. Links. Music.

Am I linked? [2.5/5 points] Kind of. You have my link up, but it doesn't work. Half points.

Favorite entries: [12/25 points] 1, 2.

Originality: [4/10 points.] A spickle.

Quotes: Favorite Entries.

Most Memorable: Nothing, to be honest.

Comments: You seem pretty mature for your age. You have your goals set and I think that's a good thing. Good luck. Bit of advice, don't through yourself into a relationship entireyl, becuse if it ever ends you're fucked [mentally, physically and any other way possible]. Your diary layout could use some major work. It's really cramped and jammed together. As much as I think it represents you, I still think it should be changed. If nothing else, increase the font sixe or change the font all together.

Would I come back:[12/20 points] Probably not.

Total: [97.5/200]