Username:[4/10 points] It makes me think of that movie. I didn't like that movie. I don't really think it seems interesting. Just trendy.

First Impression:[15/20 points] Blech. I dislike this. It looks grungy, but clean. Weird. I'm not a big fan of green, but everything looks neat and pretty, so I'll give it a shot.

Content: [20/50 points] So I started at your very first entry and you were horrible. You used internet slang and said "freak on a leash" at least 4 times per entry. That might be your thing, but you're 15. Grow up.You seem kind of snobby to me. You kind of acted like you thought everything revolved around you and "spat" on preps. Ummm, not to label, but you sound like a typical prep too, doll. Well, I decided I'd click on over to more recent entries and see if your writing [or you] had changed and not much changed. You still didn't capitalize and used internet slang. [gtg, u, lol, etc...] You just talk about people, school and pointless things. I couldn't get interested at all. You have bits of what you think or feel here and there, but you don't really go in depth with it. It just seemed boring to me. It seemed more for yourself and not others, so maybe you should keep it that way.

Layout: [15/40 points] From here. I just don't like it. No offense to the designer, but I think it seems boring. It seems out of place with the white background. It's somewhat original, so that give you a few good points. It's neatly organized too. I don't really like those "about me" sidebars. You have a diary to tell about yourself and I really doubt that box of 20 words will tell people THAT much about you. Archives are a bitch. Fix that. The layout really doesn't suit your personality that much except for that mindless "Oh, I'm so different and I won't change" bullshit you keep driving into my head.

Contact: [5/5 points] Notes. Guestbook. Email.

Updates: [5/5 points] Spiffy enough.

Extras: [8/10 points] Me. Guestbook. Rings. Reviews. Cast. Facts. About me.

Am I linked? [5/5 points] Of course.

Favorite entries: [0/25 points] None.

Originality: [5/10 points.] I'll give you partial since you try so hard. [rolls eyes]

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: The way you talked about your friends. Richard situation. School.

Comments: Grow up a teensy bit. I didn't feel like I was reading something from someone of almost my equal age. You seem really concerned with school, and that's good, but you should branch out more. Have fun. Don't have "friends" you don't like. If you truly don't like someone then why are you wasting your time on them? Oh, I have jealousy. Your boyfriend spent the night? Gee, I wish my boyfriend could spend the night. You seem alot more pure and virginal than me, so I bet we'd handle it two totally different ways. I want to give you 5 bonus points for the simple fact that our boyfriends share the same name [Justin]. +5

Would I come back:[10/20 points] In a few years/months.

Total: [97/200]