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My Hopes Are So High That Your Kiss Might Kill Me...
Content: [35/50] Tsk tsk. You have good punctuation and fairly good grammar, but you ruin all that with internet slang. [ex: OMG!, @, cuz, etc...] I also can't stand the squiggle lines you use [~]. At first, you started out as a typical 15 year old girl. The ones that I hate and make fun of because they're so peppy and annoying, but then you got deeper and more serious about things. It's almost as if you did a complete change within a matter of 2 months. You seemed so carefree and lifeless before and now you have emotions and opinions. In the end, I liked the change.
Layout: [40/50] I see the layout comes from here. I like the layout. All the pictures work nicely, and the colors go well together. Downside, I hate Dashboard Confessional. I know that shouldn't affect anything, but it just irks me. I really like the layout though, and if it was any other band I would probably give you higher points, but I'm a music snob. One other thing is that you AIM link and Email link run together. That might need to be fixed.
Contact: [5/5] Guestbook. AIM. Email. Notes.
Updates: [10/15] Kind of regularly. It seems like you skip days here and there, but you're probably just busy.You don't seem to skip more than about 3-5 days, so that's good.
Extras: [10/10] Nice! Profile. Reviews.Quizzes. Guestbook. AIM. Email. Notes. Imood. Horoscope. Rings. Fans. Who Am I [bio]? Links. Short Bio [to the side]. Before 32 [list of things planned before the age of 32]. Explanation[why diary, why username, etc...].
Comments: I liked the emotions and extreme change of maturity. That was very enlightening. You seem to have a great ability to write, but I don't think you put it to use that much.
Quotes: "Boys perplex me. I just don't get it! How do you know when they like you? You don't! It's endless guessing and analyzing, which I try to stay away from, but it's so hard! Bah on guys!"
"So I guess my answer to the question that Good Charlotte asks is that I don't want to be like anyone, only like me. There is no such thing as "them". It's all in your head."
Favorite Entries:[50/50] 1,2,3,4,5,
Would I Come Back: [15/20] Maybe. Just to check up and see how things are going for you.
Total: [165/200]
