Username: [2/10 points] Obviously, it's a nickname of some sort. I don't know what the number means, but I don't like numbers following usernames unless they are necessary. I imagine you're some 13 year old girl who enjoys cheerleading and dolls. You may not be, but if my first impression of you was "kaylabug" I would definitely think that.

First Impression: [10/20 points] Gorgeous layout! What's this? A school note-styled entry with squiggles and the word "y'all." Oh, joy. This should be fun! [rolls eyes]

Content: [15/55 points] Wow. I have no idea where to even start criticizing you. First off, you write mostly to your friends in every entry. Your diary is probably mainly for your friends, which is why you do that. Sometimes it's okay to leave a short note to a friend in your diary, because we can always skip over it, but when every entry is addressed to someone it gets old. While reading your diary, I felt as if I were reading a note someone wrote me in school. Most of your entries start with "What's up? Nothin' much here! Anyway..." and then goes into some sort of information meant for one person to read. Obviously, I can't get into your diary, because I have no idea who these people are. You don't have a cast page to tell me anything about anyone. I probably wouldn't be too interested even if you did, to be honest. When you don't write entries to certain people, you usually write about what you did, who likes who, who hates who, who you don't like that day, and other normal teenage problems. I don't know how old you are, but I hope your writing matures as you do, because your diary is a joke right now. Your words also look crammed together because you don't space properly after end punctuation. The only thing that is worth giving you credit for is the fact that you capitalize and try to use punctuation.

Layout: [20/40 points] Bitch-n-Moan. I've seen this layout once or twice before, so it's all right, but nothing out of the ordinary. I like the lyric across the image. It goes well with the layout. I've just spotted annoyances. Okay, the previous and next link are "<" and ">" and are barely visible. I don't like how the navigation is set up either. It seems so empty. The layout is gorgeous, but the previous and next links, and navigation could use some spiffing up in my opinion. Your archives page is a bright purple diaryland template. I'm ashamed. Tsk. Tsk. Your main page and archives page templates should match or at least relate to one another. Nothing is archived, but you don't have too many entries, so it's no big deal.

Contact: [2/5 points] Email. Notes. The guestbook doesn't work.

Personality: Bubbly, close-minded, immature, self-absorbed. You're always complaining about something and how much you don't like somebody. You really need to grow up. I know that probably makes you mad and such, but it's true. You do seem to care a lot about your friends. I have to give you that. You're going through the "boyfriend stage". If you don't know what that is, please let me explain. The boyfriend stage is when you go out with a boy for 2 weeks or more and declare your love for him, but break up before the 1 month mark. You then wander off and find a new boy whom you are fascinated with and repeat. Don't get offended by that, because even I went through that stage. You'll get over it and won't remember half of the boys you dated, I promise. Another piece of advice: Don't get to caught up in your friendships, because as much as you say "friends forever", it never really happens.

Extras: [0/10 points] A rings page that doesn't work.

Am I linked: [6/5 points] In your profile as a favorite diary.

Favorite entries: [5/25 points] Sorry babe, but none of your entries appealed to me, but I'll give you credit for trying because you seem nice.

Originality: [1/10 points.] Sorry again, but they're millions just like you. I guess you're one in a million though, so here's your one point.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: How normal you are.

Comments: You need to do some work on your diary. Fix the links, maybe change the layout a bit or get a new one. I know you got a pretty bad review, but don't let it bother you much. It's just a diary. It's a recollection of what you want to remember. Even if another person (me) doesn't find it interesting at least you can look back in a few years and remember all the good, bad, and ugly times you've had.

Would I come back: [5/20 points] Very doubtful.

Total: [66/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]