Username:[3/10 points] Boring. I wouldn't click it. It's your name, I'm assuming. I could be wrong, but I don't know.

First Impression:[20/20 points] Pretty and pink.I really don't know how these other diary/journal sites work. It looks pretty simple and easy to navigate, so no complaints, yet.

Content: [40/50 points] Well, You didn't really have that much to go on. I like to read more than that usually, but it's cool.One thing that bugged me was those smiley faces you kept using. They made me lose place of where I was reading. Anyway, you have pretty good grammar and punctuation. You have a few mistakes here and there, but who doesn't? It was a nice journal/diary overall. I couldn't really get into what you were saying that much, because it was basic day-to-day stuff. I liked reading the situations with Brett and Josh, because we're all teenagers and love a good drama. Other than that, I was easily bored. I probably wouldn't have been if you had more to read. I like the way you write for yourself though. You don't really see that much. You seem cool, honest, and confident with yourself. Awesome.

Layout: [20/40 points] It has pink, which is a must and I don't really get the quote at the top with the turtles, but that's probably my own ignorance. Everything looks like it's in a neat order. The links are down the side and turn blue when I scroll over. Nifty. I don't like the entry titles being so huge though. That kind of looks shitty. Shrink. Plus, when I clicked on 'Poetry' and '100 Things' and a few other links, they didn't take me anywhere. You might want to check that out. From here. Your archives seem to be missing a few entries. I don't understand why, but that needs to be fixed too.

Contact: [2/5 points] Email. Comments.

Updates: [4/5 points] Decent.

Extras: [2/10 points] My Pets. More on Me. Photographs. 100 Things. Poetry. [But, most don't seem to work]

Am I linked? [0/5 points] Not that I see.

Favorite entries: [20/25 points]1, 2.

Originality: [5/10 points.] Hmmmm, I guess.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: The Brett situation and the budding love affair with Josh.

Comments: Organize some links and keep writing more.

Would I come back:[12/20 points] Eh, possibly.

Total: [128/200]