2004-03-19 | 9:11 p.m.
Liarface-- Carve your heart out yourself.
Username: [8/10 points] I can dig it. It reminds me of those people who say boyface, chickface, and dollface. That bugs me. I hope you're not one of those people. Anyway, the name catches my attention, so great choice!
First Impression: [20/20 points] Wow. This layout is awesome. I love the colors. It even has your username flaunted across a darling image. Just wow.
Content: [35/55 points] This was the first entry I came across and it instantly reminded me of myself. I've actually said that last line before. Creepy. Your writing as a whole is mostly complaints about life, love, and teenage life in general. You have a more mature and realistic grasp on it, so it isn't annoying like it is in most other journals. You share a great del of feeling like here, here, and here. I sort of have an immunity to complaining and whining about life, because I do my share. I just got a bit aggravated that you couldn't be positive at all. Nothing seemed to satisfy you for more than a day. You're not depressed, you're just bored in my opinion. I don't like how you don't use names. Everyone has a nickname. I find it really annoying how that's become a trend lately. I know I don't know the people, but a normal name, like Jason, sounds a lot better than Sick Boy. Your writing isn't boring or bad. It's quite the opposite. I would enjoy it if it didn't bring me down so much and make me hate the gender with the penis. It would probably be a good read for a lonely, bored, and bitter feminist.
Layout: [39/40 points] CherryBomber Design. I love this layout. I assume you had it customized. It's a beautiful design. The colors go so well together and everything is very neat. I usually don't like layouts that flaunt usernames, themes, etc.. but it works for you. If I had to change anything, I would change the font style to Tahoma or Verdana, because what you're using now looks sort of cramped and pixelated. It's probably just my eyes, though. Great design!
Contact: [3/5 points] Guestbook. Email. Comments.
Personality: Negative. Angry. Individual. Abused. Heartbroken. Confused. Alone. Bored. Honest. Free spirit.
Extras: [10/10 points] Intro. About. 75 Things. Survey. FAQ. Disclaimer. Pictures. Cast. Reads. Links. Reviews. Best Entries.
Am I linked: [5/5 points] Yeah, baby.
Favorite entries: [25/25 points] One, Two, Three, Four, Five.
Originality: [6/10 points] Somewhat. You have your moments of brilliance.
Quotes:
I don't keep everything for myself. It's just that you all looks so pretty when tears are running down your faces. And your pain turns me on.
Most Memorable: All the nicknames and your relationship with "Fallout Boy", if I'm not mistaken.
Comments: Your writing is great, it's just not particuarly my cup of tea. You reminded me a lot of myself. We share several of the same situations and feelings on things. That's probably the only reason I enjoyed reading your diary. The only real complaint I have is the font you use. I suggest changing it to Tahoma or Verdana. It would look a lot cleaner.
Would I come back: [15/20 points] Probably.
Total: [166/200]
[reviewed by: Mandy].
