Username: [10/10 points] I don't know what it is. I might click on it out of curiosity. It sort of makes me think of a flower, which makes me think of The Wizard of Oz. You reminded me of one of my favorite movies, so yes, I would click you. Now, tell me what it really means.

First Impression: [15/20 points] The layout's dark and depressing, but I see a photo of a shoe in the entry. A goddamned pair of Converse and Vans. Black, of course. I am going to descriminate against you. Be warned.

Content: [25/55 points] The first entry I read was something about you going to get Mary Kay make-up. I read a few more about you complaining about a review, getting a fish, and this Brad fellow. Most of your entries are typical daylogs. I got bored reading after only reading about 20. You basically write about something that happened that day, wether it be important or not. You seem to be really caught up in yourself and this turned me off to reading your diary. You usually write about some odd occurance that happened to you or that you saw someone or smething of the sort. It wasn't that interesting, but your friends probably get a kick or two from reading it. I also got the feeling you were writing more for reviewers and other people than yourself. I despise when people do this, because it turns their diaries in fluff. Boring, pointless fluff. If you're going to keep a diary it should be to write about personal things or things that are important to you. Something that really confused me was the guy, Nate, you kept mentioning. You said a few times that you loved hm, but you also said you loved Tim. Are you cheating or is he just a really close friends or what?

Layout: [20/40 points] Design. It's a pretty depressing layout. The links are hard to read over the dark image. You could make them a lighter color or make them change to a different color when you scroll over them. They're completely invisible on the archives page, so you need to do something. The previous and next links at the bottom are invisible, too. This is a big problem, because for the unknowing eye, it isn't there. For someone to read your older entries means they would have to go back to your archives page. The links don't look like they could be easily customized, so you probably got stuck with whatever the designer added originally. I don't like this layout too much. It doesn't go with your personality at all. The font is too big and annoying. Change it to Tahoma or Verdana. The only thing I really like about this layout is the image. I think it's pretty. I like the "jumbled mess" look and this is a perfect example of it. I also like the font on the image, but that's about it. I would suggest a different layout though, because this one doesn't say anything about you, nor does it even come close to representing you.

Contact: [5/5 points] Notes. Email. AIM. Guestmap. Tagboard.

Personality: Hyper. Preppy. Jealous. Immature.

Extras: [7/10 points] Pictures. Cast. Surveys. Reviews. 101 Facts. Trading Card. I-mood.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] I am patiently waiting under "reviews".

Favorite entries: [10/25 points] One, Two.

Originality: [2/10 points] Please, love, don't get me started. Just take your points and go.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: Brad/Nate/Tim situations.

Comments: I would like to give you a few comments about relationships, but that's your shit, not mine. It would probably only piss you off anyway. The only real problem I have with your diary is the layout. I felt mislead after reading your diary. The layout makes me think of you one way and then your writing is totally different, so you might want to change it to better represent your personality. I also thought you were ALOT younger than you were. You didn't strike me as very mature for your age and your writing definitely wasn't mature. I think you need to mature as a person before you do anything that will alter your life, like marriage, but that's just my humble opinion.

Would I come back: [10/20 points] I don't know. One day. Maybe.

Total: [109/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy].