Username: [2/10 points] It sounds boring. It makes me think your name is Samantha and your friends have a country accent and call you "Samanther". The 2009 is probably te year you graduate. If so, god, you're young.

First Impression: [20/20 points] The layout is gorgeous. I love it. It's a pretty beach scene, but not that sandy, ocean view kind of scene. It's dark and could be used as a depresseing layout if you changed a few things, but it works for you.

Content: [10/55 points] I can't stand to read most of the crap you write about. I'm sorry to be so harsh, but you don't write about anything worth reading at all. Your capitalization, punctuation, and grammar are horrible. There are at least 15 typo's per entry. I tried to make out what you were talking about, but you also have many fragments so I was, to put it mildly, confused. I'm sure the pathetic teenage drama you write about means something to you, but it doesn't to me. I could give less than a shit about who's dating who, who's mad at who, who broke up with who, or who's your best friend. I read about 6 entries and stopped. You didn't have that many to read, but I still couldn't force myself to read them. It has nothing to do with you. You just need to grow up a little more before I can relate to you or have sympathy for you. I'm assuming you're around the age of 12-14, if that, and right now you're growing up. I'm not saying what you write about isn't important to you, because at the time it is, but 2 or 3 years from now it won't matter at all. When you read this you'll have useless accounts of things that happened and no account of how you felt about it. It will all be physical happenings with no emotional connection. Your diary is for your friends and your friends only and I doubt anyone else would find it the slightest bit amusing, unless they take it as a joke.

Layout: [38/40 points] Pokytemps. I like the layout. The image is beautiful and it's very elegant. It doesnt follow the lead of your writing, but it does give your diary some decency. You probably chose this because of the "pretty sunset." I'm betting that's as far as you thought into this layout. I would suggest something that doesn't give the reader the wrong impression. When I came to your page and saw this layout, I expected something calming and relaxing to read, but instead I was bombarded by a shrill voice rambling about boyfriends and school life. Go find something with ponies or rainbows, that seems more your style. I'll stop criticizing you and get down to the actual layout now. The layout itself is beautiful. I don't like the way the links are set up or the way it gives you a limited amount of links. That's the only real complaint I have about this layout. Good job Pokytemps!

Contact: [1/5 points] Notes. Email.

Personality: Selfish. Drama Queen. Immature. Sheep. Annoying. In certain aspects of the word, a "prep." Growing up. Unfocused. Hypocritical.

Extras: [0/10 points] None.

Am I linked: [6/5 points] In your profile. Wonderful! We don't have anything beneath our name, which makes me think we aren't liked. Oh well.

Favorite entries: [0/25 points] None. Sorry.

Originality: [1/10 points] Sorry dear, try again later. You get your "1 in a million" point though.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: I don't have anything nice to say, so I won't say anything at all.

Comments: I think the only reason I couldn't get interested in your diary was because I'm older than you, more mature than you, and I don't know you. Almost everything you mention is directed toward someone you know and as a random person, I found that annoying. You do have emotion, but it's so prefabricated and childish it doesn't even register as emotion to me. Maybe in a few years, when you've grown up and learned a little more about life, you'll have more interesting things to say.

Would I come back: [0/20 points] No.

Total: [78/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy].