Username: [2/10 points] The last few diaries I've looked at has been people's names. I hate that. How hard is it to be semi-creative with this? Anyways, I give you two points for having a somewhat unique name. It's not popular. At least not around here, so thank your mom.

First Impression: [10/20 points] The layout is a mess. The blue is pretty and calming, but I think it needs some work.

Content: [20/55 points] I know you don't want to hear this, but I simply got a little bored reading about god every entry. I'm not too big on religion, but obviously, you are. I'm glad that you have something that you can believe in and I'm also glad that you devote your life and time to what you believe in. I just couldn't realte mushc to you or your diary, because I don't believe the same as you do. I admire your faith. I really do. I guess the only way I can explain it to you is to compare our diaries. My diary is chock full of sins and many things I'm sure you wouldn't want to read because you don't agree with it. Actually, you might even find me a bit offensive. It's just a matter of what you want to read. I would rather read someone's diary that I could relate to and feel close to, as I'm sure you would. I didn't feel that with you because you spoke mainly about your religion and I actually coudln't even relate to the way you spent your spare time, because I spend mine in different ways. I know people like you and don't get along with them to well. They think of me as a satan-worshipping freak and I think of them as someone trying to shove god down my throat. As for your writing, you write fairly decent. A few of your more recent entries contained a lot of slang, lack of punctuation, and capitalization. I don't know why you decided to start writing that way, because it's really annoying, but whatever tickles your pickle.

Layout: [10/40 points] Design. Wow. I have no idea where to start. I like the blue and white, because those are my faovirte colors in a layout. I'm not a big fan of the brush effects and flowers, but this is sort of pretty. It reminds me of my grandma's blue and white China plates. Anyway, you must be in the process of a layout change or you really don't take that much care of your diary because NONE of the links work. I can get to diaryland and the designer site, that's all. The previous an next links don't work either. The archives page is a diaryland template. Tsk. Tsk. This is just a big mess. I'm giving you 10 points just because I like the aesthetics of the design, so thank the designer.

Contact: [0/5 points] None.

Personality: Religious. Emotional. Simple. Honest. Loving. Open-minded.

Extras: [0/10 points] None.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] Nothing is linked, my child!

Favorite entries: [15/25 points] One. Two. Three.

Originality: [6/10 points] You're original in that "bible-toting teenager" sort of way.

Quotes:

Thank you God for saving me. I don't care if all the people in the world think I'm the biggest brain washed idiot in the entire universe. God loves me....

Most Memorable: Your love for god and all that you've gone through lately.

Comments: I feel like you need to expand your life a little more. You seem really sheltered, like you don't know a lot about what's going on in the world. I don't want to tell you not to write about god, because I understand that's an important part in your life, but maybe add a few more things about your life or something for the not-so-religious people. I apologize for youw low score, but it isn't entirely my fault. Your layout was a mess, you had no extras or contact, and a few other things were a little out of place. Clean up the layout a bit, add a few extras, get a guestbook, and ask for a re-review.

Would I come back: [10/20 points] Possibly. It depend son my mood.

Total: [78/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy].