Username & diary title: (5/10) Ms-Lucifer - I'm not sure what I think about it. I picture this really open, honest, and blunt chick with a cigarette in hand. My visual image of ms. lucifer. Yeah, I'd click it, but you probably scare away a lot of religious freaks. ||Dirty Laundry|| - It probabaly came with the layout. Not too original, nor captivating.

First Impression: (10/20) Hm, A faceless (but very leggy) woman removing her underwear, how nice. It has a pretty nice color contrast and the image isn't too shabby. Not much room for links.

Layout: (20/40) Design. I personally don't like it, nor do I like the image it gives off. I do think the arrangement is quite nice and the way the image is positioned is beautiful. I just don't like the image or the "Just airing my dirty laundry" bit at the top. It just seems a bit ...nasty? Maybe that's not the word, but it is mighty close. The colors go well together, like I mentioned before, but I think the links need a little more excitement. Maybe a font change or color change, they're too boring for my taste. Everything looks neat though, but the layout itself just isn't my cup of tea. Pardon the cliche. The archives page is archived, so I thank you kindly for that. The only problem I see is how the entries are listed. The long date and short description makes it looks very crowded. I think you should change the date format and it would make it look cleaner.

Contact: (3/5) Notes. Email. Guestbook.

Extras: (3/10) About Me. Pics. Reviews.

Am I Linked: (5/5) I am a pending review. I apologize for the wait. I've been drastically busy. Again, sorry.

Content: (55/55) Well damn, my child! I thought my life was dramatic. In every entry it's something. I swear you can't go a day without something happening. I liked it a lot. Your life is so interesting. You also seem to have a natural ability too write, but not the overexaggerated type with huge words and snazzy descriptions - you just spill your heart out on paper and I think that makes it seem natural. I found a few things about you shocking, but at the same time I can relate and feel your pain. I thought you were a lot older and then I read an entry stating that you were 14. 14! (Go to comments now!) Okay, sorry I had to skip and get that out. Now, this entry I enjoyed a lot. I relate to that very much and in more than one occasion. For the most part, the majority of your writing is pessimistic and another portion of it is fueled by anger. If you divide into even more sections some of it is inspired by love, heartache, and even happiness. You're not a "great writer" by definition, but you inspire me. You make me feel not so alone and not so hurt and I think that's exactly what people are looking for when they read a diary - someone to make them feel better. Your grammar could use a little tweaking and you might want to use spellcheck or something before posting, doll, because typos are everywhere.

Favorite Entries: (25/25) A - B - C - D - E

Personality: Outgoing. Honest. Mistreated. Searching. Romantic. Friendly. Loved. Defensive. Obsessive.

Quotes:

After the relationship has finished and most of the feeling aren't there anymore you look back and realise the way he treated you was unacceptable - the words he used towards you were hurtful yet you were blind to all of this. You could have prevented it all. You loved him though.

Your song: Agent Orange - Somebody To Love. It just made me think of you. I don't have much of a reason why. It just did. Listen to it and maybe you'll know why.

Your new name: I think your name should be Monica. Monica seems very outgoing and open, somewhat like you, but more refined.

You should be: A waitress. I can just imagine you taking my order at a Caffe Latte. No offense. Plus, I think you'd be cute in a little waitress dress.

You remind me of: A book. Open to the world about anything in your life. Nothing's a secret.

Comments: Girl, you're 14. You have alot of living and growing up to do. When I was 14 I thought I was as adult as anyone could be, but now that I'm older I realize "hey I was a stupid kid back then." I thought I had everything planned out, my life, my career, my schooling, my boyfriend, etc..., but things don't always work out the way you want or the way you think they will. Example(s) - I wanted to be a lawyer, but after reading up on the process and sacrifices, I think I would prefer being a cosmotologist. I thought I would graduate and go to college and now, I'm a drop-out. I thought I was going to be with my boyfriends forever, and although we are still together, forever isn't anywhere in sight. What I'm saying is take things slow and live a little. Don't try to grow up so fast. Just be a young 'un and enjoy it while you can, because once you get older - life sucks.

Would I Come Back: (20/20) Yeah, sure.

Total Score: 146/190

[reviewed by: Mandy].