Username:[4/10 points] Hmmm... Depressing. I don't think I'd pick it out of a list. Just seems normal.

First Impression:[10/20 points] Why have all the diaries I've been reviewing lately have purple in them? Christ! I don't like the girlish butterly look either. [sigh] I really hate those god damn blobs and cats and crap. Ugh!

Content: [20/50 points] You're really young. You seem quite naive too. You write really well for someone your age, but you seem kind of caught up in the fact that people think you're "wise beyond your years" and such. I used to get that when I was about 12-13 and it got annoying. I just wanted to be cool with people my age, not older people. I don't know what to say really. You seem like you want people to think you're depressed and feel sorry for you. Your puncuation and grammar are great. I give you props for writing better than half of the 16-18 year olds that I've reviewed. As well as you write, I just wasn't attracted to your diary. It bored me. You talk alot about looks and personality and all that snazzy stuff. You always say it's what's on te inside that counts and then you complain about how "ugly" you are. I don't understand that. I think it's the age gap and maturity level that cause it. If I was somene your age I probably wouldn't be interested in your diary because it seems too coordinated. It's like you know every word you're going to say before you start writing. Your diary shoudl be a place where you just let your thoughts flow. Good, bad, ugly...whatever. You seem to write more for other people than yourself and that's sad.

Layout: [15/40 points] Here. It's really boring and simple. Too simple. It's just a ribbon type border with a butterfly at the top and bottom. I just find it completly unoriginal. It seems "young", if you know what I mean. I dig the effect that makes te links read backwards. I also love the open book effect. Awesome. Nifty effects, shitty layout. It really seems to fit you so as long as it expresses you, great.

Contact: [6/5 points] Notes. Email. Guestbook. Shoutbox. Chatterbox. Guestmap. Cough *attention whore* cough.

Updates: [7/5 points] I don't care, but I looked... and you update a whole fucking lot. 5 times a day! I'm not sure wether to gie you extra points or take points away!

Extras: [15/10 points] Cast. Old website. Reviews. 8 Symptoms. Trading Card. Wishlist. B-day counter. Other multiple links. Damn!

Am I linked? [4/5 points] It took awhile to find and I'm at the very bottom of the page. Plus, I'm in a drop down menu. That's weird. I don't like it.

Favorite entries: [15/25 points]Odd,Poetic.

Originality: [5/10 points.] You'll find it when you get older.

Quotes: Favorite Entries.

Most Memorable: Finding out how young you were.

Comments: I don't want you to think I discriminated against you because of your age. I didn't. You asked for an opinion of your diary from me and I gave it to you. Others may not have the same opinion. You seem like a really good writer and I think once you get older you'll grow into your talent. I would definitely suggest changing your layout, but it is your diary and it does seem to suit your girlishness and youth. I hope you're not offended by anyting I said in here. It was meant to help you, not offend you.

Would I come back:[5/20 points] Sorry, doll. No.

Total: [106/200]