Username: [7/10 points] It sounds somewhat interesting. It makes me think that there is a story behind it, so it's mysterious. I would probably click on it if I saw it in a list. The 08 isn't necessary, but maybe it's the year you graduate? I can dig it.

First Impression: [19/20 points] Wow! A layout that goes with the username 100%. Neat and very organized. Hm, that counter has got to go!

Content: [35/55 points] Hm, well you seem to have an interesting life. I'll start with the minor things first. You hardly ever punctuate or capitalize anything. If the writing is exceptionally well, I usually don't pay it much attention, but your writing is pretty average for someone your age. You misspell a lot of simple words over and over again. It's either short-hand or a repeated typo. You might want to run a spellcheck on your entries before you post, to fix that problem. Now, what is with the "~subject change~" thing? In a certain way I like it. If I'm reading something boring I can always skip to the next subject, but in some ways it's annoying. It interrupts the reading. Eh, get rid of the squiggles, make it a little more dignified, and I might not mind as much. I don't like the way you end your entries with your name and your username. It's just a waste of space. As for actual content, your entries usually center around your friends, boyfriend, etc... which is probably important to you, but not necessarily me. Your friends probabaly love to read your diary, but I don't really find anything that holds my attention. You do have emotions in some of your entries, but nothing more than the normal teenage girl. I can relate to some of your entries, and you as a person, but for your diary as a whole, I think you have a little maturing to do before you can really express yourself.

Layout: [38/40 points] Diva designs. I like the way it goes so well with the username. That's really differen't, because I don't see many diaries that do that. I also have this weird fascination with eyes, so you got me there. I don't like the links in the horizontal row at the bottom. It's just a peeve of mine, but I suppose there is nowhere else they could go. The colors go together nicely, but the counter is way too distracting. Hide it or put it on an extras page.

Contact: [1/5 points] Notes. Uh oh.

Personality: You seem like a really sweet girl. I feel like a lot of your friends take advantage of you, because you don't seem to stand up for yourself too much. I think you let little things get you down that shouldn't matter as much to you as they do. I know you love your boyfriend, but boys come and go. You're young and he could be the one or he couldn't. If he is he'll be there and if he isn't then don't waste your time worrying about him, find someone else. Now, my advice for the school rumors and girls talking about you, tell them to fuck off. Seriously, I know you might be shy or something, but they'll stop. You'll have this huge argument with them, but they won't talk about you anymore, because they know you'll stand up for yourself. I know all these things seem important right now, but in a few years none of it will matter. I promise.

Extras: [3/10 points] 100 Things. Quotes. Poems and Songs.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] Yep, and on the main page too!

Favorite entries: [25/25 points] One, Two, Three, Four, Five.

Originality: [7/10 points.] At certain times, yes.

Quotes: See: Favorite entries.

Most Memorable: All the highschool drama in your life. Your family situations.

Comments: I think before long you will have matured and learned a few things that will help you and your writing to grow. I can already see in your more recent entries that you're starting to change, and that just makes me curious. Keep writing and don't let the little things get you down.

Would I come back: [20/20 points] Yeah, eventually.

Total: [161/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]