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Username: Shoppergal06. Hmm, I can't decide whether or not I like it. I LOVE shopping, so it catches my attention, but the "gal" just kind of bugs me. Hmm, i'm still undecided, but I think i'd click on it if I saw it. [7/10 points]
First Impression: Cute layout. Cute colors. Looks like the navigation is going to work out pretty well. The first impression, is a good one. :) [20/20 points]
Content: In your first few entries, you have TONS of shoutouts, and you tend to use words like, "peeps," a lot. That throws me off, and it gets me PRAYING that the other entries actually have some depth. I kept on reading, and in the past few months, your writing sure has imrpoved. You don't use internet slang have as much, and I got interested in a few of your entries. Yout end to daylog quite a bit, and sometimes it can be annoying, other times it can be quite interesting. Your diary is a mix of both. Overall, I like your writing, but I think you should dig deeper into your emotions. It looks like you have a lot to say, and well, I think you should SAY it. :) [40/55 points]
Layout: I like it. It's cute. The colors are pretty, the picture makes me smile, and I love shopping.[40/40 points]
Contact: Notes, and then a yahoo and aol name on your profile. Add a guestbook or tagboard if possible.[3/5 points]
Personality: You seem like a cool girl. Someone I can relate to on certain topics, and someone who has a lot to say about life. I know this isn't your personality, but let me just say, I simply ADORE your name. I LOVE LOVE LOVE it. :) Actually, i'm giving you 3 bonus points, because your name is SO awesome. :) I also looked at your favorite movies, and bands, and we have a lot in common in that area. Awesome!
Extras: Damn. No extras. [0/10 points]
Am I linked? I am linled. :) [5/5 points]
Favorite entries: All your recent ones. [20/25 points]
Originality: A good mixture. :)[10/10 points]
Quotes:
"P.S. At least I know I have God... he'll always be there."
Most Memorable: Situation with friends. School stuff.
Comments: I basically said everything already. Just try to add a few more contact methods, and add some extras. That'd really help.
Would I come back: I might.[10/20 points]
Total: [155/200]
[reviewed by:Shannon]