simeons-twin
2004-02-28 | 7:52 a.m.

This is not here

Username: [8/10 points] Well, it sort of intrigues me. I don't know what it means. I can take a few guesses, but I doubt they're correct. It catches my attention enough.

First Impression: [20/20 points] Is that Yoko Ono and...nah, couldn't be. I love black and white layouts. Neat, crisp, and clean!

Content: [45/55 points] I began reading February, 1st. Your diary went back to September 2001, so I wasn't even going to attempt reading every month. First thing I noticed was that you have an obsession with the Beatles, which explains your layout. Most of your entries are rather long and day-loggish. You don't show much emotion toward your life in your writing. It's basically about what you did, what you want, or what's on your mind. You write amazingly well. I found no typos or punctuation errors the entire time. Your writing draws attention, but after awhile it tends to get boring. I loved some fo your entries, but others rambled and lost my interest. You have many entries about the Beatles and I'm a fan, but you seem to devote your diary and life to them. It's a bit unhealthy, but if it keeps you happy and partially sane, I guess it's okay. For the most part, I enjoyed your diary. You're amusing, funny, and interesting.

Layout: [40/40 points] Design. Wow. It is them. I feel cool, because I was right. Anyway, I love this layout. Plain and simple. I love the brush effects. I love the image. I love the way it's setup. Everything is great. I really like the way the previous and next links are at the top and bottom. They kind of blend in with the layout, but if someone looked hard enough they could find them. I don't have anything to complain about for once. Nice choice!

Contact: [5/5 points] Notes. Email. Guestbook. Yahoo.

Personality: Are you sure you don't have some sort of obsessive disorder? I'm joking. You seem to be generally happy, which made me feel good about reading your diary. You have a good outlook on things. You seem to be somewhat sarcastic, or at least you were in some of your entries. I think you're a very interesting person and I'd like to learn more about you, but your diary doesn't represent you well enough for me to do that. I think you're the type of person I would get along with and befriend. Definitely.

Extras: [8/10 points] About. Cast. Rings. Links. Aerosmith. Beatles. Deathxwish [diary]. Reviews.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] Yep. I'm there.

Favorite entries: [25/25 points] One, Two, a href="http://simeons-twin.diaryland.com/929.html">Three, Four, Five.

Originality: [10/10 points.] You have it, some don't.

Quotes: Favorite entries.

Most Memorable: Your Beatles fascination!

Comments: I can't tell you what to write, because it's your diary, but I would like to read more about you. I know the Beatles are important to you and interesting, but you mention them in almost every entry. I want to know about you. I'm not saying anything is wrong with your writing, because I found it enjoyable. I just wish I could have gotten to know you as a person, hear your plans for the fture, your dreams, your dislikes, what's going through your mind, and many other things.

Would I come back: [15/20 points] Probably.

Total: [181/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]

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