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Username: Smalleyes. It sounds like there'd be some sort of story behind it. It's not to original, but I like it. I'm not sure if i'd click it or not. I probably would. [7/10 points]
First Impression: Aw the picture is VERY cute. The colors are okay, although all the red is a tad bit blinding. The white text on the red background looks nice. [17/20 points]
Content: I started with your first entry, and even your VERY first entry back in 2003, made my mouth hit the floor in amazement. You're emotions are amazing. They're also so real and genuine. You write about things of great importance to you, and it gets the reader very interested in what's going on. I really enjoyed your entries about that journalism camp. I'm really into journalism and hope to pursue a career in it, so it was very fun to read about that. I can't say enough, how much I adore your style of writing. It's very sophisticated, mature, and interesting all at the same time. It was weird, because it was almost like reading the same points of view I have about some things, and wishing I could put it into words like you do. You seem like a truely amazing writer. Wow. You get 5 extra bonus points. [60/55 points]
Layout: The only thing I don't like is all the red, because after a while it hurts my eyes. Other then that, the picture is so cute, the words on the picture are heartwarming, the navigation is great, and the font on the red background is also great.[38/40 points]
Contact: Guestbook, notes, email, aim. Perfect. [5/5 points]
Personality: I love your personality. You seem like someone I would really get along with. You have a very good input on things, and you seem to honestly realize the importance of life. And the fact that you've mentioned how you want to make a difference, is awesome.
Extras: Many many many. I especially enjoyed reading the other diary with your poems and such in it. 2 extra points for that one. [12/10 points]
Am I linked? There it is! [5/5 points]
Favorite entries: The ones with your poems. And the very first entry. [25/25 points]
Originality: You definately seem like your own person. You don't seem to follow the crowd, and you know how to be yourself. [10/10 points.]
Quotes: "It's happening so fast. Am I wasting my time, my life, sitting here? Should I be out making a difference in the world right now? I don't know. And it scares me."
Most Memorable: Your style of writing, stuff with Nick, stuff with Journalism camp.
Comments: I enjoyed basically everything. You seem to be very organized and like i've said many times before in this review, I ADORE your writing.
Would I come back: Without a doubt.[20/20 points]
Total: [199/200]
[reviewed by: Shannon]