Username: [9/10 points] I really dig that username. It seems pretty original. I'd really like to know your inspiration for it.

First Impression: [20/20 points] I love this layout with burning, relentless passion. It's simple and beautiful, yet complicated and dirty. I don't think I like the "boxy" links though.

Content: [40/55 points] Confusion. I went all the way back to your first entry and it's in a completely different language. I didn't get anything, but the very last sentence. I also found you had bouts of throwing a few other unreadable entries into the mix. I wish I knew what was being said. I can only imagine and that in itself is quite a chore. This entry was funny to me. You had an odd reaction to the shooting. I found that peculiar, but rather honest. You didn't go into as much depth about some things as I feel you should have. You rambled on about rather daily, uninteresting things and left important details out. It left me wondering. I kept waiting and waiting for you to fill me in on what was going on and you never did. Disappointment. From what I gathered you're homosexual, correct? If I'm wrong, please correct me. This entry kind of indicated that. I liked reading about your relationship problems. I guess I never realized that gay people have [some of the same] problems in their relationships as straight people do. I liked reading your diary, even if I didn't understand some of the things you were speaking of or couldn't read certain parts. It was quite entertaining.

Layout: [40/40 points] You self-designed it. That's fucking awesome. I like it. I usually like more colorful designs, but this is just fucking beautiful! I'm not sure what kind of message you're trying to send out, but in the end it fits your personality like a glove. I didn't like the boxes used as links because I had to wait a few seconds for the description to pop up. I don't really know how you could fix that without basically screwing up the rest of the layout, and since I love it so much...I'm just going to deal with it.

Contact: [2/5 points] Email. Notes.

Personality: After reading only a few entries I could tell that you were one sarcastic, cynical and blunt little fucker...and that's exactly why I think you're unique. You said what you wanted and how you wanted. Most people don't really do that in their diaries [or in real life] and I think it's good that you can express your emotions so openly. You don't come off as some whiny kid who gets depressed over a B- on a report card. You have genuine pain. You don't write for other people to read, you write for you and only you. Admirable.

Extras: [10/10 points] Quizzes. Codes. Rings & Things. Montley Fools [cast, FAQ, etc...].

Am I linked: [5/5 points] You bet!

Favorite entries: [25/25 points] 1, 2/a>, 3,4.

Originality: [10/10 points.] Very much so.

Quotes: Favorite entries.

Most Memorable: Relationship.

Comments: Don't change a thing. Unless you want to make it a little easier for people to contact you, because that seemed to be your only hang up. The content is great, but you could use a bit more detail and don't write in characters that most people can't read.

Would I come back: [15/20 points] One day.

Total: [176/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]