Username: [10/10] I like your username. It's simple, it isn't cluttered with random numbers, it's pronounceable. When I first saw it I was thinking more along the lines of a like costume cape, but that was totally off. But I would definitely click on it, it's different.

First Impression: [14/20] Very simple layout. The colors match very well together and with the image. It isn't too busy and it looks very organized. But there's a tagboard, and it's in the middle of nowhere. And there's a random black box at the bottom that totally doesn't match that has a bunch of links in it. But the entries look short, yay!

Content: [20/55 points] EEK! You don't capitalize and most of the time you don't use periods! And you can't spell for shit. The weirdest thing is when you actually use periods you put one and then a space and then another period, like so. . You mostly write about your relationships with other people. Your writing is kind of choppy and at the same time it's all over the place. I'm wondering how you manage to get such good grades in english. You are very hypocritical at times, it was kind of annoying. Many times you talked about being totally in love with this guy and then the next entry you hated him. You mentioned many different people in the few entries you had and I was quite confused about who everyone was. Maybe a cast page would've helped. I found your writing to be quite, well, boring. You talked about the same thing most of the time. Once and awhile you discussed a little more but not usually.

Layout: [25/40] The template is from Charm Designs. You've got some good things in this template, and then you have some really bad things. First, the good things. The colors match wonderfully. The image is pretty and I like the really small grid over it that makes it look sort of dithered. The words that are written on the image match the feeling the whole layout gives. I also like how the titles are in their own boxes of a different color. Now the bad things. The tagboard ruins everything. I advise you just link to a tagboard, or get comments for your entries. It's just so out of place and doesn't match. And then there is the black little box under the tagboard. It has links in it. Why? Why aren't they just on the sidebar or something? If you are going to put them separate, at least make the box a color that matches the rest of the layout. The previous and next links don't work. It was a pain in the butt to look at every entry because I had to keep going to the older page to choose the next entry. I'm taking 5 points off just for that.

Contact: [3/5] notes. tagboard. aim.

Personality: moody. hypocritical. confused. bored.

Extras: [3/10 points] 4 links. photo album. imood.

Am I linked? [5/5 points] Nope. But I feel bad for you.

Favorite entries: [15/25 points] 1, 2, 3.

Originality: Your diary was very typical. If you didn't mention your age I would assume you were 14 or something. All you really discuss is your boyfriend and complain about various things. [3/10 points.]

Quotes:

we've decided that one day this summer we are going to dedicate to tracking down the evil "herd" and yell penis out the car windows while driving by. DOWN WITH THE HERD they all need to go back to pre-school, all I have to say is 9th graders should NOT be in high school, they are way to young and disrespectful to upperclassmen.

Most Memorable: Your various relationships. Your horrible spelling/grammar.

Comments: Do something about the tagboard. Maybe add some more extras, your diary is too plain! And learn how to spell and use punctuation.

Would I come back: I really don't think so, but maybe. [5/20 points]

Total: [117/200]

[reviewed by: Lanni]