Username:[8/10 points] Ahem, well, I think, of course, cock. I also think of a clock going "tik-tok." Anyways, I figured it would be fun reviewing.

First Impression:[20/20 points] Haha. The Christmas poem [?]gave me quite a laugh. It looks neat and clean, so I should be able to get around pretty easy here, not to much linkage though, so I'll probably get bored.

Content: [35/50 points] Oh my god, I am overwhelmed at your age. I thought you were at least 20, of course I'm not good with ages, but my god! You have exceptionally well grammar and punctuation. I'd like to see a wee bit more of how you felt about things. You showed emotion, but didn't describe alot of times why you felt that way and that left me confused. You have a great writing style and a great way of explaining things, if only you explained personal things instead of everyday events, you might have intrigued me a bit more. You had humor and that's a good thing. The entries were mostly short, so I read all of them.

Layout: [ 40/40 points] I like it. It's not something I would use at all, but it seems to suit you perfectly. The red and white go well together. It's Christmas-y, but not overdoing it like some people tend to do with holiday layouts. I like it alot. It's neat and clean very in tune with my Christmas spirit. [Smiles]

Contact: [7/5 points] AIM. Notes. Guestbook. Email. Tagboard. Very, very easy to contact you.

Updates: [4/5points] Kind of regularly. You missed a couple bigger spaces, but nothing major.

Extras: [10/10 points] Profile. Christmas Questionnaire and what looked to be like e-mail forwards and such. Reviews. 337 Questions. 65 Things about you. Gifts received. Previous layouts. Graphics. Beautify. Buy Gold. Join Fan Club. Links. Secret Santa. Whew! Busy boy!

Am I linked? [5/5 points] Let's click and see... Why yes, I am! Thank you. I'm in awe of how many review sites you've applied too. Jesus!

Favorite entries: [25/25 points] 1, 2, 3.

Originality: [5/10 points.] Well, it's the first time I've ever read a diary mostly full of internet stuff. It was kind of strange, like you didin't really have much of an outside life, but original, it was.

Quotes: None.

Most Memorable: Your age. I still can't get over that. I'll let everyone else discover for themselves, bit I was shocked-shocked!

Comments: You seem a bit egotistical. Kind fo selfish and such. That kind of turned me off to thinking you were were a nice person, but maybe it's just te way you worded some things or overreacted. Your diary is nice the way it is. Nothing really should be fixed here.

Would I come back:[20/20 points] Maybe, in a few months.

Total: [179/200]