yesudegongzhu
2004-02-16 | 7:59 p.m.

Yesu De Gongzhu (She IS the monkey)

Username: [4/10 points] Unpronouncable. Confusing. I guess it means "she is the monkey" which is cool, but unless I speak... god knows what language, I wouldn't know that. If I saw it on a list I would simply think "gibberish".

First Impression: [10/20 points] It looks really crowded. Oh, a monkey, how cute and predictable. Stupid banner. I hate banners!

Content: [53/55 points] You write a lot about god. You write more about god than most girls do their boyfriends. You're obviously relgious, but you seem to have a bit of humor with your religion as well. If you came off as one of those dress wearing, bible-carrying, church girls I probably wouldn't have read over 5 entries, but you don't. I'm not spiritual or religious at all, but your diary kind of made me think. I'm sure some people with an attitude such as mine wouldn't have given your diary a second thought and to be honest I was kind of dreading reviewing it, because I thought it would be another protest of faith and how god is everything, well it is, but in a diferent way. I suprised myself when I decided that I liked reading your diary. I don't really know why I do, but I do. Your punctuation and grammar are great. You had few mistakes. I'm not complaining. I like the way you phrase certain things and I think you have quite a talent for writing. Keep it up.

Layout: [10/40 points] Designed by them. I don't know what to say. It's really messy. You need to definitely get rid of some of the extras on the sides. It just kind of makes it hard to pay attention to your entries and that's what I'm supposed to be reading. I don't like this. I don't particularly like blog layouts at all, and the fact that there is a banner peeking out from behind it is really annoying. No cigar, babe. Plus, when I went back to read your older entries you had a different layout. I don't know what the deal is with that, but you might want to fix it.

Contact: [2/5 points] Guestbook. Comments.

Personality: I'm at a crossroads, because as religious and god-fearing as you seem, you're also quite your own person. You don't follow along all the christian standards and ideas. For instance most christians would freak out at the thouht of a purple-haired girl, but you're not one of those people. Plus, you don't let your religious views influence your taste or choice in clothes, music, etc... From reading your diary, you seem to have a great sense of humor and don't take yourself too seriously about some things. I don't know. Maybe I just liked the idea of a purple-haired, christian screaming fuck at me and quoting the bible.

Extras: [10/10 points] About me. Favorites. Listening to. My stuffs. Links. Blogs I'm reading. Counters. First online journal. Second online journal.

Am I linked: [5/5 points] On the main page, under links.

Favorite entries: [25/25 points] I had several, but I wasn't sure how to put the link up, so I'll list the dates. January 13, January 19, January 26, January 29, February 6, February 10.

Originality: [9/10 points.] I gotta give you that.

Quotes: In Favorite entries.

Most Memorable: Your love for god and the way you write.

Comments: Keep writing and keep your faith. Change the layout though, please, babe?

Would I come back: [15/20 points] Probably.

Total: [153/200]

[reviewed by: Mandy]

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